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Wednesday, August 20, 2014

My two kids

I am lying in the middle
My two kids on my sides..
I feel blessed
My life complete n suffice.



As the night progresses
One moves, the other snores..
Both play gimmicks
That never makes me bore.

Both are innocent..
Also, naughty sometimes
As they tease me
And bring me sunshines.

I look at one and then another
And hug them with both hands..
Why not, for I have just two kids
One a girl, the other my husband :)
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25 comments:

  1. ManiparnaAugust 28, 2014 at 9:29 AM

    Awww..so sweet...:-D

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  2. MonikaAugust 28, 2014 at 9:37 AM

    Beautiful .... :)

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  3. Vinay NagarajuAugust 28, 2014 at 10:06 AM

    ahwww.. That was a really sweet one :). Esp the last line, beautiful Roohi :)

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  4. Bikramjit Singh MannAugust 28, 2014 at 11:28 AM

    That is so beautiful
    and indeed the last line takes it all :)

    Bikram's

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  5. Tomichan MatheikalAugust 28, 2014 at 11:52 AM

    Lovely. The last line made me laugh out loud.

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    1. Roohi BhatnagarAugust 30, 2014 at 7:50 AM

      Glad Tomichan that I gave a small reason for someone's hearty laugh :)

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  6. Ravish ManiAugust 28, 2014 at 1:31 PM

    Wow Roohi....How sweet... A few days back, I was reading a comment on marriage on fb. Little girl asked her mother "What is marriage?" And the mother replied "Marriage is just a fancy word for adopting a overgrown male child who cannot be handled by his parents anymore.... :)

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    1. Roohi BhatnagarAugust 30, 2014 at 7:51 AM

      hahahaha.. I have read that too Ravish.. My husband, though, looks sheepish to read this ;)

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  7. Datta GhoshAugust 28, 2014 at 2:29 PM

    Wow Roohi that was so sweet! loved the ending truly husbands are the kids we raise. :)

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    1. Roohi BhatnagarAugust 30, 2014 at 7:53 AM

      Yup Datta.. sometimes kids, sometimes teacher, mentor and always caring like bestest of friends.. :)

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  8. M S MahawarAugust 29, 2014 at 4:14 AM

    beautiful words..

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  9. Yogi SaraswatAugust 29, 2014 at 5:25 AM

    In the middle of night
    One moves, the other snores..
    Both play gimmicks
    That never makes me bore.
    simply beautiful words ! all the things common to all children

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  10. Gitanjali BanerjeeAugust 29, 2014 at 5:32 AM

    Haha! The ending was unexpected but so true. Hubbies are the actually the youngest kids :)

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  11. Being Mrs DuttaAugust 29, 2014 at 5:55 AM

    Great Creativity! I can feel from your writing how much you love them both. It's a great feeling to hold your dear ones close.

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    1. Roohi BhatnagarAugust 30, 2014 at 7:55 AM

      True Aditi :) Nothing can buy that feeling in this whole world..

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  12. Zindagi-Mai aur Meri KavitayenAugust 30, 2014 at 9:25 AM

    Awesome Roohi :)

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  13. IndraniSeptember 4, 2014 at 9:57 AM

    :D You made me laugh.
    But I do understand.

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